Pixie Bruner wrote five great poems. The first, "The Kaboom," brings to mind Robert Frost's poem, "Fire and Ice." "You were awaiting,/ like Marvin the Martian,/ an Earth-shattering 'kaboom'./There is not even a satisfying 'boom'/ 'smash' 'crash' or explosion./ Instead, there is merely a disappointing sizzle." The other three form the Dreamfruit Series. Dreamfruit is another name for our nightly dreams. In the first poem of the series, we are harvesting the dreamfruit, "...making soporifics and potions./ Made into lozenges and communion wafers/ to dissolve underneath eager tongues of the wordsmiths, the lost, and the dreamless." However, "Timing is essential./ A day too late, they become grenades./ Seeds become steel shrapnel." Three more poems deal with Lilth and the Dreamfruit, packaging the Dreamfruit, and the overconsumption of the Dreamfruit.
I really didn't understand "Scoring Performance 9" by Regolith Crosser, CA, 32,000,000 Hours Past Michael Hessel-Mial. It starts with a "Not found" error, then goes to lines that talk about a singer and a "Limb and Payload game". It seemed like so much convoluted nonsense. It just drones on, line after line that don't reveal a storyline, message, or anything that makes sense. I also found that David Huntington's poem "A Briefing From Command" goes on a bit too long. I also liked the poetry of Ariya Brandy, C.M. Ellis, especially Elpis, and Ace Boggess. Overall, it is a good book and worth taking a look at.
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